雅思作文高分秘诀之一

2019/07/17 作者:小贵贵

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【雅思作文高分秘诀】之一就是避免在雅思写作中经常使用代词,比如:我/你/我们。

尽管使用代词语法可能是正确的,但在雅思作文中,你的文风应以正式的学术风格为目标。举几个例子。

1.人称代词:

‘There
are strong arguments to be made in support of the complete ban on
smoking in all areas, as I will now
explain’.正如我现在要解释的那样,有充分的理由支持在所有领域全面禁止吸烟。

在这个例子中,可以通过简单地用被动结构来改下。例如:

‘There are strong arguments to be made in support of the complete ban on smoking in all areas, as will now be explained’.

2.表达观点时的人称代词

‘I think that the government should support students rather than requiring them to apply for loans.’“我认为政府应该支持学生,而不是要求他们申请贷款。”

虽然这句子在语法上是正确的,但从更“中立”的角度来呈现你的观点会更具学术性。例如:

‘It would perhaps be more effective if the government supported students rather than requiring them to apply for loans.’

3.举例说明人称代词

  ‘For
example, my friend is a nurse, and she feels that longer holidays are
just as important as the money because it helps her reduce
stress.’"例如,我的朋友是一名护士,她觉得更长的假期与金钱一样重要,因为它有助于减轻压力。"

在上面的例子中,作者可以避免引用朋友,更多地关注护士。

改成:‘
Nurses, for example, often state that longer holidays are just as
important as the money as it provides an opportunity to reduce stress.’

4.结语中的人称代词

作文中的结论应总结论文的主要论点(理想情况下包括推荐或推测)。但是,在这里也要小心使用人称代词。例如:

‘As we can see the subject of school uniforms remains a subjective issue.’
我们可以看到学校制服的主题仍然是一个主观问题。

改成:‘As can be seen, the subject of school uniforms remains a subjective issue.’


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