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本文是学为贵雅思写作名师杜仕明老师（新浪微博:@杜仕明-学为贵）发布的《4.13大陆task2参考范文（可能的观点和结构之一）》，Discuss类型题目的A/B两个观点往往限定比较多，大家读题的时候一定要注意，否则TR分数稳稳5。针对B观点的分析一定要谨慎，不能宽泛地说明星参与的坏处。以下是参考范文内容：
Task2：Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is quite common that many celebrities,like movie stars and famous athletes, participate in activities held by international aid organizations. Opinions are divided on how their support affects these activities. I believe that although famous people's presence in charitable events may divert the public's attention, it is definitely of great importance to provide more help to the needy.
There has been a concern that the importance of charitable activities may be weakened with the presence of many famous people. This is because fans of the movie stars or the NBA legends may pay more attention to how their idols dress themselves or whether they are in the center of the stage. What is worse, tabloids lead readers to the gossips or scandals of the celebrities instead of how much they contribute to helping people in need.
On the other hand, advocates of celebrities' involvement believe that they have such a significant influence on millions of people following their accounts on social media, such as Twitter or Facebook. When these famous people deliver a speech in a fundraising gala or make a donation to an organization towards assisting needy people in third world countries, their followers may contribute their own effort to combating the same problems. For example,in 2015, hundreds of famous people, ranging from sports stars to Nobel Prize winners, took part in a series of activities named the Ice Bucket Challenge. They successfully promoted awareness of the disease ALS and encouraged donations to research.
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（本文雅思写作范文由杜仕明老师原创发布）
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