屠鸭福利:3月23日大陆考试雅思满分范文

2019/03/25 作者:小贵贵

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  本文是学为贵雅思写作名师杜仕明老师(新浪微博:@杜仕明-学为贵)发布的《3.23大陆Task2参考范文(可能的思路之一)》,限定词很多,别简单描述家长和老师的影响。这题目有more的比较,所以我还是选择进行对比而不是同样重要。以下是参考范文内容:


  Task2:Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


  Before the age of five or six, parents play a dominant role in supporting the development of their children's intelligence and social skills. However, I strongly believe that once children begin to receive formal school education, they will be more influenced by teachers in terms of intellectual and social growth.


  Through a variety of courses, teachers can greatly improve students' mental abilities. For example, math teachers guide students to become logical by analyzing the theory of various formulas. The ability to express opinions can be fostered by art teachers who invite students to praise and criticize artworks. What parents can do at home, in comparison with teachers, is rather limited as most of them have little time and lack the ability to academically guide their children. This is particularly true as their children move to higher grades at school.


  With regard to helping students develop faster socially, teachers still outdo parents. This is because teachers organize various activities at school to make students good at socializing. For example, in the P.E. class, pupils are required to engage in competitive sports which help them to learn important social lessons about winning and losing. Also, required to team up with others for discussions or presentations, students may be easily able to cultivate the quality of listening and understanding.  This is impossible at home because most working parents can hardly provide such an opportunity.


  In conclusion, 老规矩。


(本文雅思写作范文由杜仕明老师原创发布)


  杜仕明老师简介:学为贵写作名师;北京交通大学英语专业;北京奥运会翻译以及现场英文播音;15年英语教学经验,8年雅思写作教学经验,雅思写作成绩8.5分。授课风格:逻辑清晰,思路明确,一针见血,清晰明了。学术性强,上课既有趣又富有感染力。


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