屠鸭福利:2月23日大陆考试雅思满分范文

发布时间:2019/02/25 作者:小贵贵

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  本文是学为贵雅思写作名师杜仕明老师(新浪微博:@杜仕明-学为贵)发布的《2.23大陆task2参考范文》,(重复,因为之前出现了XXX government被强制审核了)虽然我也觉得第一个核心段的写作目的很奇怪,但从题目来看就是要陈述“钱和时间被花在保护上”而不是分析“为什么应该花在保护上”。议论文写作不是写你想写的而是论述你被提供的观点和话题。以下是参考范文内容:


  Task2:Some people think that a large amount of money and time is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


  It is argued that if the financial and time resources invested in protecting wild animals were used for human benefits, there would be better outcomes. I do not think such an argument can be justified.


  There is no doubt that the amount of money and time paid for preserving rare species has been significant and increasing. For example, at a cost of billions of dollars, the XXXXX government, since the 1970s, has established national reserves for giant pandas. After years of protection, the once-endangered animal has now been removed from the list. Also, a large number of non-governmental organizations have been making great effort to maintain a sustainable environment for wild animals against environmental pollution and illegal hunting.


  There are two reasons why I do not think that the resources for animal protection should be used for the benefits of human beings. Firstly, without spending money saving wildlife from becoming extinct, we would not be able to live on the Earth for too long because humans rely heavily on other animal species for various purposes, like the control of insects. Secondly, the protection of natural habitats of wild animals plays a crucial role in ensuring human survival. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide, and stabilise the Earth's climate. If we budgeted the money towards other fields, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation.


  In conclusion, 老规矩


(本文雅思写作范文由杜仕明老师原创发布)


  杜仕明老师简介:学为贵写作名师;北京交通大学英语专业;北京奥运会翻译以及现场英文播音;15年英语教学经验,8年雅思写作教学经验,雅思写作成绩8.5分。授课风格:逻辑清晰,思路明确,一针见血,清晰明了。学术性强,上课既有趣又富有感染力。


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