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本文是学为贵雅思写作名师朱宏老师（新浪微博:@朱宏-学为贵）发布的《2018年3月3日雅思大作文解析（文字版）》。以下是参考范文内容：
In many countries, prison is the common solution to the problem of crime. However a more effective way is to provide people with better education so that they will not become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Indeed, education plays an essential role in preventing crimes. The key reason lies in the fact that people will be away from a life of crime if given the access to education. Civilised individuals with high awareness of law and morality can clearly distinguish the right from the wrong and refuse to do illegal things or sacrifice the interest of others on impulse. By contrast, those with poor educational background cannot find a job to make a living. With resentment and disappointment, they may form gangs or groups to commit robbery or other more serious crimes.
However, this does not automatically mean that education is the better solution to tackling the crime problems. After all, there is still the need of imprisonment. For those habitual criminals, who have committed crimes repeatedly and show little respect for the legal systems and those extremely violent lawbreakers, such as murderers, their thoughts are deeply ingrained and their behaviours always endanger/ contaminate our society. In this way, we should maintain the law, give victims and their relatives some compensation and consolation by punishing law violators. Moreover, sentencing them into prison can deter those potential criminals, which helps to lower the crime rate in societies.
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