满分雅思写作预测范文之交通投资

发布时间:2018/02/04 作者:小贵贵

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  本文是学为贵雅思写作名师朱宏老师(新浪微博:@朱宏-学为贵)发布的《九分雅思写作预测范文(交通投资)》,希望对贵粉儿的写作有所帮助。以下是原文内容:


  Some people think governments should  spend more money in improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways) rather than  roads and highways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


  思路分析:


  此题是让分析光搞公交或者光修路吗?如果这个问题没搞明白,你肯定跑题哦!此题很重要一个词!more!!啥意思?就是多花点钱的意思,也就是说另一个方面花吗?肯定也花啊~因此估计还是同意了吧~


  多搞搞公交有啥好处呢?除了人们出行方便、环保之外还有啥?


  修修高速也有点啥好处呢?要想富,先修路……


  『范文』


  As many countries, such as China and India are along the road of economic development, new demands are being put on the transportation infrastructure of the country. This is particularly evident in the cities, where daily traffic jams are unavoidable facts of life. Faced with a mounting traffic crisis, I believe the government should focus on improving public transportation instead of improving roads and highways.


  Public transportation is cheaper, better for the environment, and a better long-term solution for meeting the transportation demands of the future. The traffic crisis in large cities is mainly due to the increase in the number of private cars on the road. If a group of  people each drive their own private cars to work in the morning, polluting emissions from these cars deteriorate the air. Having extra cars on the road not only means more traffic, it also means that all cars on the road will run their engines longer to produce more pollution while they idle in traffic jams. On the contrary, if those same people take the bus to work, there would be less traffic, and even less pollution. More bus and subway lines would also save much space now wasted on parking lots, which makes sense from both environmental and city-planning perspectives.


  Investment in public transportation also makes sense for the customer. The most expensive public transportation in the city costs is still dwarfed by driving cars. Two trips across the city every day for a whole year would still be less than a fifth of the cost of a new car, not to mention the inevitable expenditure of maintaining a good performance of the car. Taking into account the considerable upkeep expenses of a car, gas, insurance, and repairs, owning a car is much less economic and convenient than is taking the bus or the subway.


  Although investing money on highways is imperative for holistic benefits of our country, I personally believe the need for solving current traffic disasters that are prevalent in most such major cities is more urgent. The problem has already become the biggest headache of local governments and their residents, and would cost even more if not handled promptly.


  核心表达:


  along the road of economic development:经济发展的道路上


  infrastructure :基础设施


  a mounting:大量的


  polluting emissions:污染排放


  deteriorate :恶化


  idle in traffic jams :堵在路上不动


  parking lots :停车场


  be  dwarfed by:被…所超越


  upkeep expenses :保养费


  imperative  :必要的


  holistic benefits :全局性好处



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