给你的雅思写作来一个漂亮的开头吧!

发布时间:2016/07/31 作者:小歪

正所谓万事开头难,第一印象又是非常重要的,此理同样适用于雅思写作哦,如果有一个漂亮的开头的话,对于整个分数可是非常有好处的哦,这就和学为贵的老师一起看看到底怎样撰写一个漂亮的开头吧!


多积累好的词汇和句型,多看范文是必须的。雅思写作是需要我们输出更多你已经学习到的内容,所以积累是前提,埋头苦写可是没有什么好效果的,范文好句子是需要你学习的。如同熟能生巧一样的道理。


范例:机经真题:

Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town.While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the Internet at home.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


拿到这个题目,很多同学写开头都陷入了一种典型的模板化形式,笔下的开头是这样的:

Nowadays, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, whether government should establish free libraries in each town has sparked much debate. Some people think government should establish free libraries in each town, while others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the Internet at home. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.


你是不是和上面的一样呢,这可不是雅思写作高分的开头哦,考官对于这样的开头也是不喜欢的。我们这里看看范文:先来看一下题目:

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


考官范文的开头是这样的:

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

  这样的开头没有模式化,通过对其中的child’s education个定义,谈论相关的观点。所以下定义,再加上你的观点,这样很好地引出背景或者自己的论据会更加自然。更多雅思写作实用干货欢迎随时关注学为贵官网

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