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　　本文是学为贵雅思写作名师朱宏老师（新浪微博:@朱宏-学为贵）发布的《九分雅思写作预测范文（犯罪类）》，希望对贵粉儿的写作有所帮助。以下是原文内容：

　　Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　思路分析：

　　1.一直跟随咱们学习的亲应该明白，这一旦看到题目有一个观点，而且这个观点还说的挺绝对的，咱是同意还是不同意呢？

　　2.这些改造好的曾经的罪犯为什么可以教育孩子不要犯罪？

　　3.还有哪些人是可以教孩子这方面的信息的呢？注意审题！估计很多学生这里容易犯错，既然题目说曾经的罪犯是最好的人选来教孩子不要犯罪。那咱要是认为人家说的有点绝，就一定应该说还有别的人！！！而不是别的途径。

　　It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is a way to discourage them from breaking the law.

　　In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.

　　However, this does not automatically mean that these former criminals are the solely desirable persons who can tell the difference between right and wrong for students. After all,  the alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be also effective. One option would be for police officers to visit schools and talk to young people. This could be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to lawbreakers when they are caught. Owing to the nature of admiring hero, young people are often willing to take advice from figures of authority. A second option would be for school teachers to speak to their students about crime, as students would see teachers as credible sources of information about this topic.

　　In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who have turned their lives around after serving a prison sentence could help to deter teenagers from committing crimes. However, others should also be welcomed to remind students.

　　核心表达：

　　ex-prisoners， Reformed offenders， ex-offender， former criminals ：曾经的囚犯

　　lawbreakers：罪犯

　　dispel：驱散

　　glamorous ：迷人的

　　indifferent：漠不关心的

　　shocking nature of these stories ：这些故事的触目惊心的事实

　　alternatives ：替代物

　　credible sources ：可靠地来源

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