满分雅思写作预测范文之政府投资

发布时间:2017/12/21 作者:小贵贵

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  本文是学为贵雅思写作名师朱宏老师(新浪微博:@朱宏-学为贵)发布的《九分雅思写作预测范文(政府投资):》,希望对贵粉儿的写作有所帮助。以下是原文内容:


  Some people say that governments should pay for the public health care and education, while others say that it is people’s own responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


  思路分析:


  题目双方观点是否矛盾,可否结合在一起?则文章结构如何?


  为什么需要政府给钱?政府给钱而非个人给钱有何好处?


  为什么医疗教育需要个人支付?不能说是为了减轻政府负担吧!


  Model answer:


  Recently, how to finance the increasing costs of healthcare and education has bothered both government and individuals. Some people insist that they should be provided by governments for free, while others think otherwise, holding that it is not the responsibility of the governments.


  It is evident that good health and quality education for its citizens are fundamental and essential to the well-being of a society, so they should be among the top priorities of a government’s agenda, along with other issues such as sovereignty or social security matters. That is to say, the government actually has the responsibility to take care of its people in terms of their health and education. When there are physically and intellectually qualified social members, they can devote their efforts to helping government tackle the social difficulties and problems. In the long run, the sustainable development of the society can be ensured.


  However, does this automatically mean such expenditures should be expected to be covered by the government? Some opponents may often point to the fact that there is not an unlimited budget for a government, and there are simply too many issues to deal with and spend money on. They also argue that taxes will be definitely raised if all the costs of public healthcare and education are paid by the governments. Moreover, the most direct benefited group of the decent education and health care is not the government, but the individuals. Therefore, quality private healthcare and education should be paid partly by people themselves.


  To conclude, I firmly believe that governments have an indispensable role to play in developing a healthy and educated society but that financial burden on governments should not be neglected.


  核心表达:


  finance:拨款


  the well-being of a society:社会的幸福繁荣


  agenda:议程


  sovereignty:主权


  social security matters:社会安全事务


  intellectually qualified:身心合格的


  devote…to…: 把…贡献给…


  sustainable development: 可持续发展


  expenditures: 花销


  opponents: 反对者


  decent education: 优质教育


  indispensable:不可或缺的



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