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　　Some people think that economic progress is their most important goal. Others, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.

　　Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

　　思路分析：

　　本文给的两者观点是否可以调和？我是否可以认为两者说的都对。

　　经济发展是重要的目标，为什么？经济发展能带来什么？

　　还有哪些因素是衡量一个国家发展成功与否的重要指标？（这篇文章不禁让我想到了那些寒冬腊月天，被迫居无定所，无立锥之地的人）

　　People have different views about how governments should measure their countries’ progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important.

　　There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries. Firstly, a booming economy results in job creation, a high level of employment, and better salaries for all citizens. Secondly, economic progress ensures that more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. For example, a government with higher revenues can invest in the country's transport network, its education system and its hospitals. Finally, a strong economy can help a country’s standing on the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power.

　　However, this does not automatically mean that having a healthy economy should be the sole target of a country. After all, the economic development may simply fulfill people's desire for better material life. Thus, I would argue that various other forms of progress are just as significant as the economic factors mentioned above. In particular, we should consider the area of social justice, human rights, equality and democracy itself. For example, the treatment of vulnerable groups is often seen as a reflection of the moral standards and level of development of a society. Perhaps another key consideration when judging the progress of a modern country should be how well that country protects the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively, the success of a nation could be measured by looking at the health, well-being and happiness of its residents.

　　In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country’s success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.

　　核心表达：

　　measure their countries’ progress：评估国家发展

　　booming economy：繁荣的经济

　　infrastructure：基础设施

　　stand on the global stage：站在国际舞台上

　　social justice, human rights, equality and democracy：这些词自己回去查！以免发布出去（哎）

　　vulnerable groups：弱势群体（低**人群）

　　sustainability：可持续性

　　a key marker：关键指标

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