从历场雅思写作范文提升你的写作能力(1)

发布时间:2017/11/10 作者:小贵贵

  学为贵雅思培训项目部提供:从历场雅思写作范文提升你的写作能力(1)。


  本文摘自学为贵写作大神杜仕明微博(@杜仕明-学为贵),内容包含9.9、9.16、9.21、9.30、10.5、10.14、10.21、10.28、11.4等9场雅思考试大作文杜仕明老师亲笔范文。


  0909 大陆task2题目:


  Some people believe that any money the government spends on supporting artists (like painters, musicians and poets) should be better spent on other important things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


  请大家注意,题目中的any绝对是你要回应的一个点。能看到这个单词的同学应该瞬间就能想好思路:虽然政府应该花钱保障人们的各项服务,但是花在艺术上的钱并不是不值得的。


  Money of any government is not inexhaustible, so leaders of a country are always entangled with the question of how to best allocate the limited budget. Some people argue that every penny should be spent on major improvements of citizens’ standard of living rather than supporting those creating artworks. I completely disagree with this opinion.


  While it is true that the government is expected and obligated to build a society in which roads are broader, living costs are lower, and literacy rates are higher, I strongly believe that government investment in assisting artists is equally worthwhile. Well-supported artists are able to make significant contributions to both individuals and the society.


  From an individual perspective, people could enjoy more beauty and vision with the creation of well subsidized artists. Without worrying about making a living, musicians and writers are more able to produce better music smoothing listeners stressed out by fast paced life and better books inspiring readers bored with daily routine.


  From an economic and cultural perspective, it seems that there is a clear justification for a city investing in art. With regard to the former, it has been proven that art can be a highly profitable business. For example, a pop star who has benefited from general art education financed by local government may hold many concerts that not only sell tickets worth millions of pounds, but also get hundreds of local people hired. As for cultural values, sufficient government investment in art-related programmes helps to remain diversity and authenticity of local culture. Without the subsidies, there would be no incentive for people to research and record the ancient ways of living.


  In conclusion, I would argue that the value of art is not inferior to that of any other major services. Therefore, the decision to spend government money supporting artists should not be doubted.


  0916 大作文题:


  An increasing number of people choose to change their careers and place of residence several times in their lives. Is it a positive or negative development?


  In the past, people used to work in the same job for a lifetime and live in the same place from birth to death. Today, however, job hopping and home moving have become much more frequent. From my point of view, both individuals and society benefit from such development.


  From an individual perspective, hopping from one job to another can be highly rewarding. More specifically, if people change jobs often, then they are always challenged with a lot to learn, making their learning curve stay high. With more professional expertise and work experience comes better salary. When it comes to moving to live in a new city or even a new country, people may experience a great deal of fun and exhilaration. For example, a family from London where there is no coastline at all will certainly be amazed by the sea view if they relocate to Southampton. This means that frequent relocation may be really exciting.


  From the perspective of the society as a whole, changes in career and residence can also be beneficial. With regard to the former, job hopping increases the intensity of competition in the office. In other words, newcomers with better competence always drive those employees who have been satisfied with themselves to be more engaged and devoted. As for the positive effect on society of frequent moving home, I believe that it stimulates the need for housing and therefore boosts the economy of both places when people leave and arrive.


  In conclusion, although some people may argue that frequently changing jobs and residence may be detrimental in terms of job security and social networking stability, I strongly believe that this modern way of living is generally positive to individuals, companies, and communities.


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  0921 Task2题目:


  Some people think that governments should do more to make their citizens eat a healthy diet. Others,however, believe that individuals must take responsibility for their own diet and health. Discuss both these views andgive your own opinion.


  People have been suggested to have a healthy balanced diet. In my opinion, the government and individuals should both take responsibility to achieve this goal because they will ultimately reap benefits from it.


  On the one hand, there are two reasons why the government is responsible to make its citizens have healthy eating habits. One is that if vegetables and white meat are the main ingredients, thenthe government would be able to save large amounts of money spent on medical treatment of people enjoying junk food and therefore suffering from obesity and diabetes. As a result, there could be enough budget invested towards achieving other major improvements of people’s living standard, such as broader roads and more easy-to-reach local sports centres. What is more, by encouraging people to eat and drink healthily, the government is able to provide companies and organizations with a healthy and productive workforce, such as construction workers and police officers.


  On the other hand, everyone should carefully decide what they eat and drink on a daily basis because it not only has direct impacts on their health conditions but also affects their job prospects. With regard to the former, those who are obsessed with deep fried food or sugary drinks are highly likely to be significantly overweight. Many life-threatening diseases accompany obesity, such as cardiovascular risks. Another disadvantage faced by people irresponsible for their diet choice is that they may be in an inferior position when it comes to getting an employment. For example, a girl seeking the opportunity to be a TV hostess may fail in the first round of interview simply because of her being out of shape.


  It seems to me that both people and the government should try everything possible to create an energetic and productive society based on a healthy balanced diet.


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  0930 Task2题目:


  The widespread use of the internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?


  For a variety of reasons, the development of communications technology in particular, working or studying at home has been gaining popularity. From my point of view, although internet-based working and learning are incredibly convenient and comfortable, people would be faced with more problems than benefits.


  Advocates of working and schooling at home believe that individuals reap great benefits from it. It is time-saving for students to attend seminars and lectures at home through the internet. Instead of spending several hours getting to and from school, there are just a few steps from their working table. With the saved time, they could do a better job or have a better rest. As for adults, working at home allows them to work in their own way. For example, there is no need to wear suits and high heels which are not a comfortable choice for the majority of employees.


  However, I am of the opinion that this unconventional way of working and education causes more problems. Firstly, people who work in their living room may suffer from poor health. They are more likely to be attacked by obesity or hypertension, as they spend the whole day without any outdoor activities. There may also be extremely low working and learning efficiency. This is because people are easily distracted and disturbed by many things, such as snacks, gadgets and visitors. Finally, it damages the ability of face-to-face communication if people do all their work at home. When they have got used to sending e-mails or having a camera meeting, it is difficult for them to communicate with others in real life.


  邀请大家来写一个结尾段(千万别写出新东西,你只需要用不同的文字重复前面的观点就好)



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