10.16杜仕明雅思写作满分范文分享

发布时间:2017/10/16 作者:小歪

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雅思写作题目:

Some believe the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to the society, while others say the purpose is to help individuals to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

雅思写作范文: 

Every government allots a considerable proportion of its budget towards making as many citizens as possible have the access to education. However, debate about the purposes of education never seems to end. From my point of view, such an investment is aimed at preparing young people for life, work and citizenship.

From an individual perspective, the primary goal of education has been helping young people find a satisfying job and become independent thinkers. With regard to the former, education can make a significant contribution to career achievements by equipping young people with the knowledge and skills they need to secure a place at a good university, start an internship, and eventually land a decent job. As for the latter, schools can positively contribute to training students’ objective and unbiased way of looking at various issues by exposing them to a wide range of subjects, such asliterature, philosophy and history. 

On the other hand, as far as the government is concerned, the purpose of prioritizing investment in education is to make young children able and responsible citizens in the future. Having an uneducated population means that a country is bound to be economically and technologically underdeveloped because we are living in a knowledge-basedworld. Therefore, priority of many governments is to ensure a productive and creative workforce through education. In addition, it is true that receiving education allows people to behave more rationally so that a society with lower crime rate and less violence can be anticipated. 

Personally, I think that education is undoubtedly a multipurpose tool whichnot only empowers individuals to pursue ambitious goals in both life and work but also facilitates major improvements of society.

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