雅思考前的几个实用小tips

发布时间:2017/10/02 作者:小歪

雅思写作如何在考前实现突击呢,这里学为贵就考前雅思写作的备考为大家提出几个建议,希望帮助大家更好地应考雅思写作。

雅思考前的几个实用小tips

尽量不要写陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

例如:

1、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

Improved:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

表语转化为不同的修饰语

例如:

1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.

Better:Charity has supported the organization.

2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

使用具体的动词,让文章看起来更有说服力。

例如:

Poor:She is a careful shopper.

Better:She compares prices and quality.

不要使用语言过长且累赘的词语,要用词简单、生动。 

例如:

Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation. 

Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores. 

避免使用“be”动词

1、在“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语

例如:

Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.

Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.

2、表语转换为不同的修饰语

例如:

Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)

3、作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词

例如:

Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

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