例如:
Poor:She is a careful shopper.
Better:She compares prices and quality.
例如:
Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
1、在“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语
例如:
Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.
Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.
2、表语转换为不同的修饰语
例如:
Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
3、作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词
例如:
Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.
Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
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