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In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
高分首段：
It is true that video surveillance has become commonplace in many cities in recent years. While I understand that critics may see this as an invasion of privacy, I believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks.
同义替换学习：
the use of video cameras in public places = video surveillance 视频监督
restrict our individual freedom= an invasion of privacy 侵犯隐私（= invade one’s privacy）
（鱼儿老师整理）
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