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学为贵雅思培训项目部提供：屠鸭福利:2017年8月19日雅思写作分析。
本文是学为贵雅思写作名师朱宏老师（新浪微博:@朱宏-学为贵）发布的《2017年8月19日雅思写作分析》，以下是原文内容：
2017年8月19日雅思写作分析：
In recent years, the pressure of students in university is increasing. They are pushed to work hard at young age. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? ???
本文的结构由于题目所问positive or negative。这里存在一个很重要的词汇or，决定着考官的要求是需要我们能从这两方中选择一方（具体请参见之前所发微博头条文章“雅思官方范文的正确打开方法”）
这里同学要正确理解work这个词，这里的work可不是指“工作”毕竟一个大学生，搞啥工作呢……这里的work hard就是简单讲就是“勤奋”的意思。（停电了，打电筒都要学习）所以大家可以想想在大学“被迫使勤奋”好还是不好，哪个角度好说一些呢？应该是说negative 会好一些。
1.It is likely for these young adults to face excessive pressure which is mostly imposed by their parents and teachers. Thus, they have to allot most of their time to study and research, wishing for the desired academic record and the distinction in the final dissertation. Once failing in even a tiny quiz, they will be haunted by frustration and depression. There may be potential psychological disorder, such as insomnia and anxiety, falling on them in the end.
2.As well as the overwhelming stress, if they are compelled to work hard in order to be the 'number one', they will be deprived of the chance to enjoy the campus life. For example, many undergraduates in China refuse to attend any school activities or try to put themselves into the romantic relationships, both of which are considered to be useless and time-consuming. What attracts them only is the books in libraries and equipment in laboratories. As a result, the monotonous university life shapes them into a boring 'nerd' rather than an all-round man.
当然大家除了我这里所写所带来的精神和生活上的两大问题，还可以说其他方面的问题。大家可以留言说说你是怎么写的，等你哟。
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