定语从句带你玩转雅思口语和写作

发布时间:2017/07/10 作者:小歪

今天学为贵的帅哥老师和大家分享的是雅思口语和写作中经常会用到的定于从句,定语从句是一个非常常用且实用的句型,它可以使我们的口语和写作句式稍微复杂(语法好)、添加更多信息(更连贯、使用更多样的词汇、口语更流利)。

我们来看看下面两个段落,看一看如何简单地使用定语从句,来提升我们的写作段落。

雅思口语和写作:定语从句

Low-level version: 

A lot of people believe that cities should have more parks. Citizens should be able enjoy the natural environment better. Currently, many city dwellers have no opportunity to see trees, plants and birds and have no space to exercise. It is important because they would improve the quality of their life. For example, both old people and children would benefit from a place to exercise safely and breathe clean air at the same time.

Improved version (This is still not perfect. It is though a good deal better): 

A lot of people believe that cities should have more parks which would allow citizens  to enjoy the natural environment better. Currently, many city dwellers have no opportunity to see trees, plants and birds and have no space to exercise, which is another benefit of open spaces in urban areas. Both of these are important because they would improve the quality of life for people who often suffer from not having a pleasant environment. For example, both old people and children would benefit from a place to exercise safely and breathe clean air at the same time.

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