今天分享的是有关雅思写作主题：老年人的传统观念仍然有用吗（下），看学为贵的小鱼儿老师和大家分享的雅思写作观点和素材有哪些吧，希望对大家有所帮助哦~

雅思写作：老年人的观点

The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.

On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers（职业，生涯）. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adultsmake their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhapsthe greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.

可能没用的传统观念：

1.     以前找到稳定的工作 – 现在职业追求多样性

2.     以前父母做主- 现在自己选择伴侣和何时结婚

3.     男女角色观念 – 如今不接受男主外女主内

On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainlyapplicable to  the modern world. For example, older generationsattach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, andtaking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours （注意这里代词的用法）can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with (接触到)people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community (社区意识) and neighbourliness.

仍然有价值的传统观念：

1. 努力工作，尽自己最大努力，为自己的工作感到自豪 – 在竞争激烈的社会有用

2. 礼貌- 在全球化社会重要

3. 社区和邻里意识

In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.

(鱼儿老师整理自考官满分范文)

学习点：

be incompatible with 和… 矛盾

outdated过时的 = obsolete

becoming less relevant 改写题目的are not helpful

earn a profession and find a secure job 学习某个行业，找到稳定的工作

expect much more variety and diversity期待多样性

erode the rules around relationships破坏关于关系的规定

the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in…代与代之间最大的不同是在 …

breadwinners挣钱养家的人

traditional views and values替换题目中的traditional ideas

be applicable to 适用于

attach great importance to 重视 (to是介词)

taking pride in对…感到自豪

Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are… 其他被认为是传统的特点是…

come into contact with 接触

sense of community and neighbourliness  社区和邻里意识

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