网购几乎占据我们现在消费形式很大的一个比重,那么在雅思写作中我们该如何分析网购的坏处呢?这就看看学为贵鱼儿老师分享关于“网络购物坏处”的一个高分段落:
Firstly, although online shopping appears to offer greater convenience(提供很大的便利), it is often rather(rather 表示“相当”,是副词,后面往往接负面的不好的形容词) risky and cumbersome(繁琐的,缓慢复杂的) in practice. Consumers(=shopper/buyers)cannot evaluate the quality of online products by handling(用手触摸) them directly. Instead, (注意这个连词在语境中的正确使用)they must rely on (=depend on依赖)sellers to describe goods accurately in words and pictures. Mistakes can easily be made, leading to the inconvenience of having to exchange goods (换货)or seek a refund(退款). Products bought online also normally need to be delivered by post(邮递). The convenience of online shopping thus hinges in part on (hinge on 取决于) the efficiency of the postal service(邮政的效率).
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