从雅思写作看如何解决垃圾增多

发布时间:2016/11/13 作者:小歪

今天和大家分享小鱼儿老师的雅思写作,从雅思写作的角度谈论如何解决垃圾增多,这里为大家阐释了几个垃圾增多的原因,还有考官的满分雅思写作范文哦~

雅思写作真题:

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Why do you think this is happening? 

What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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雅思考官满分范文:

I think it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, such as processed food. But even if we buy fresh food without packaging,we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping home.


The reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more on a daily basis than families did in the past. Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaged or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the super market and then at home. (后置定语,拓展句子的有效方法)

 

However, I think the amount of waste produced(过去分词做后置定语,表示产生的垃圾量) is also a result of our tendency to use something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce. We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of. 

 

I think, therefore, (插入语,是副词,表示“所以“) that governments need to raise this awareness(提高该意识) in the general public. Children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action(注意such在这里的指代用法) by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags,by providing recycling services and by fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.

 

With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce. Certainly nobody wants to see our resources used up and our planet poisoned by waste. (这句话很好的升华了主题)

 

雅思写作学习点:

produce a large amount of waste 产生大量垃圾

packaging 包裹

processed food 加工后的食品

fresh food 新鲜的食品

plastic bags 塑料袋

carrying shopping home 带购物回家

The reason why + 句子 isthat +句子表达原因的句式

packaged or canned food 包装过的或者罐装食品

long distances 长途

store in the super market 储存在超市里

the amount of waste= the volumes of waste/rubbish 垃圾量

throw away 扔掉

plastic bags 塑料袋联前面的:packaged or canned food 包装或者灌装食品,PS: processed food 加工食品  household products 家庭用品  disposable goods 一次性产品,electronic products 电子产品 consumer good 消费品)

use up  耗尽 =strain 过度使用  eg. strain the natural resources 过度使用自然资源)

valuable resources and energy 珍贵的资源和能源

be a source of pollution – cause pollution 污染的来源

dispose of 处理

be a result of ...= be caused by =be primarily because of  是由于...

be educated about 学习关于...

take action 采取行动

put taxes on ...征收税费

provide recycling services 提供回收服务

fine 罚款

recycle one’s waste 回收垃圾

reduce the amount of rubbish 减少垃圾量(= cut the volumes of rubbish/waste

 (鱼儿老师整理自剑5 P173考官范文)

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