今天和大家分享的雅思写作话题是，孩子是不是越早上学越好，这里和大家分享雅思考官的范文哦，希望大家可以从范文中学习到一些不错的雅思写作表达哦~

考官满分范文解析：

In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. （介绍背景）However, because it is more likely now that both parents work, there is little opportunity for children to stay in their own home up to that age. Instead, they will probably go to a nursery school when they are much younger. (通过原因解释来引出话题)

雅思写作学习点：

be more likely 很可能

stay in their own home 待在家里

up to that age 到了那个年龄

there is little opportunity for sb. To do sth. 对某人来说做某事几乎不行

go to a nursery school 托儿所

While some people think this may be damaging to a child’s development, or to a child’s relationship with his or her parents, in fact there are many advantages to having school experience at a young age. （让步段

雅思写作学习点:

while 表示“尽管”，让步写法

be damaging to = be harmful to 对…有害处  （反义词：be beneficial to ）

Firstly, a childwill learn to interact with a lot of different people and some children learn to communicate very early because of this. (好处1：学习沟通)They are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents and who are not used to strangers or new situations. （讲道理来解释说明）Such children find their first day at school at the age of six very frightening and this may have a negative effect on how they learn.(对比解释)

雅思写作学习点：

interact with sb. 和某人互动=have interaction with sb. = socialise with sb. 

be generally more confident and independent 通常更自信和独立

be not used to strangers or new situations 不习惯陌生人或者新环境

frightening 可怕的

find sth. adj. 发现… 

have a negative effect on 对…有不良影响 

Another advantage of going to school at an early age is that children develop faster socially. （好处2：社交能力进步快）They make friends and learn how to get on with other children of a similar age. （解释过程）This is often not possible at home because they are the only child, or because their brothers or sisters are older or younger.  （对比解释） 

雅思写作学习点：

at an early age= at a young age 从小

get on with sb. 和某人相处

children of similar age 相似年龄的孩子

So overall, I believe that, attending school from a young age is good for most children. （观点）They still spend plenty of time at home with their parents, so they can benefit from both environments. （主题升华）

雅思写作学习点：

attend school from a very young age 从非常小的年纪上学

be good for sb. 对某人有好处（该表达真滴简单！）

spend plenty of time 花很多时间

benefit from both environments 从两种环境中受益

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