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前雅思Simon考官范文学习:
Despite huge improvements in health care,the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What could be the reason for this trend, and what can be done to reverse it? (reverse 扭转, reverse such trend = change the situation)
考官范文的一个段落学习：
Lifestyle is a major cause of poor health in developed countries. （提出原因）Most people now travel by car rather than walking, and machines now perform many traditional manual jobs.（解释如今的现代生活方式到底是什么样的：生活和工作方面）As a result, people tend to work in office where little physical activity is required. （结果锻炼少-工作方面）At home, people are also less active; most adults relax by watching television,while children play video games rather than doing outdoor sports（结果锻炼少-生活方面）. Technology has therefore made our lives more comfortable but perhaps less healthy. （总结—生活不健康）
雅思写作学习点：
be a major cause of .... = be an important factor contributing to ... 是...的主要原因
perform many traditional manual jobs 完成了许多传统的体力工作
tend to do sth. 倾向于做某事
physical activity 身体锻炼
be less active 不太活跃
...,while... 然而，表示对比
do outdoor sports 做户外运动
therefore 所以（注意是副词，不是连词）
less healthy 不太健康
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