雅思写作9分范文:教育类

2018/06/08 作者:小贵贵

  学为贵雅思培训-北京雅思培训班哪家好项目部提供:雅思写作9分范文:教育类。


  Some people say that all young people should be required to stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


  结构:题目给出一个绝对观点(all),评判:觉得太绝对,则起承转合


  分析:


  承:大部分年轻人确实应该参与全日制教育。+论据:参加教育了,才能有高文凭,才能找到好工作,才能挣更多钱,更容易得到升职机会。 此外,学习内容现在变得更复杂了,所以参与全日制教育,才能掌握一项技能。


  转:但是不一定大家都要去,有些孩子在某一方面很有天赋,就直接上这种专门的学校就好。再举个例子(比如运动小达人啥的)


  参考范文


  Education is the most important influence on young people's lives. If they cannot gain suitable qualifications, they will not be able to get jobs and begin successful careers. Therefore young people should remain in education for as long as possible.


  Nowadays, it is very difficult to find a good job without a university degree or other higher educational qualifications. If young people can obtain these they are likely to find a suitable career. As a result, they may not end up having to do low-paid jobs with little possibility of promotion or career development. For example, a factory or shop worker may be able to earn a salary without qualifications, but they will not be able to make progress in the company and get a better job. Therefore full-time education until the age of eighteen is necessary for most young people.


  Furthermore, education today is more technical and complex than it used to be in the past. If students do not spend many years mastering a range of complex tasks, their learning will be inadequate. Therefore they need extra time to stay at school in order to complete this increasingly difficult type of study.


  However, this does not automatically mean that those who are under 18 should all attend schools as full-time students. After all, the standard education may not suit everyone. For some students it may be appropriate to leave school early. If a student has a particular talent, they may need to suspend full-time education to develop it. For example, students who are successful actors or sportsmen may have the opportunity to develop their talents at the highest level at a very young age. These individuals should have the opportunity to do this.


  Although staying in full time education may not be beneficial for some students, for most it is essential. Therefore they should be required to attend school until they are eighteen years old. [319]


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