雅思写作预测范文之学校lecture vs 网络

发布时间:2018/01/23 作者:小贵贵

  学为贵雅思培训-北京雅思培训机构项目部提供:满分雅思写作预测范文之学校lecture vs 网络。


  本文是学为贵雅思写作名师朱宏老师(新浪微博:@朱宏-学为贵)发布的《九分雅思写作预测范文(学校lecture vs 网络)》,希望对贵粉儿的写作有所帮助。以下是原文内容:


  Some people think schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


  分析:题目中只有一人想法,而且还挺绝对。因此采用起承转合写法。


  承:承认从网上学习有好处


  Give reasons:


  网络有强大搜索引擎(根)


  可以找到很多信息,得到更广泛的认知和理解+例子


  转:但是也不能说全靠网络,网路无法取代学校很多功能+学校可以树立孩子三观,还有同学老师陪伴,可以培养强大的社会技能。


  Model answer:


  The Internet is developing at a surprising speed and is changing the whole way of our life and education. Some people claim that children can just study at home, making full use of abundant information on the Internet, instead of going to schools as we did before. I disagree with this opinion.


  Admittedly, the Internet is destined to play an indispensable role in children’s education. If students cannot explore the virtual world by using IE or Firefox, etc, they will be in danger of being kept from what is going on in the world. However, those students who know how to search for valuable information available on the Web tend to gain themselves big advantages in that they can browse for more detailed information about the subjects discussed in class, gaining a deeper insight into the events or experiments and acquiring a multi-dimensional understanding of the current issues, since so great a variety of related information can be accessed by some powerful search engines such as Google, or Baidu.


  However, this does not automatically mean that the Internet can play all the roles a school can, nor that it can take the place of school education. After all, the online course can not cater for the needs of face-to-face communication. In this case, school education always is, and will remain, essential for children’s upbringing. It is not only a platform to impart knowledge but also a stage to educate an individual about values and attitude, rights and wrongs, goods and evils. At school, children, encouraged by their teachers and accompanied by their peers, can benefit in a wider range. They are more likely to be sociable and outgoing, cooperative and tolerant.


  Overall, we can see that schools are actually necessary even in the so-called Internet age and young students should also be encouraged to master the computer skills to ensure a better future.


  核心表达:


  a surprising speed:瞠目结舌的速度


  is destined to:注定


  indispensable:不可或缺


  virtual:虚拟的


  gain themselves big advantages in…:在…获得巨大优势


  browse:浏览


  multi-dimensional:多维的


  search engines:搜索引擎


  take the place of:替代


  upbringing:成长


  impart:传授


  outgoing外向的, cooperative合作的 and tolerant宽容的



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