满分雅思写作预测范文之传统观念

2018/01/08 作者:小贵贵

  学为贵雅思培训-北京雅思培训机构项目部提供:满分雅思写作预测范文之传统观念。


  本文是学为贵雅思写作名师朱宏老师(新浪微博:@朱宏-学为贵)发布的《九分雅思写作预测范文(传统观念)》,希望对贵粉儿的写作有所帮助。以下是原文内容:


  The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.


  To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?


  思路分析:


  1. “传统不再对于现代生活有用 ”这个想法是不是显得有点绝对了?


  2.本文论证基本以解释为主,还是举例为主?


  3.能否想到哪些传统的观念现在没啥用了?


  4.又有哪些传统观念现如今也是有用的?


  It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.


  On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.


  On the other hand, this does not automatically mean that all the history-honoured tradition should be yesterday never once more. After all, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.


  In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.


  核心表达:


  incompatible with…:和 …不可调和


  outdated:过时的


  a secure job:一个稳定的工作


  erode: 侵蚀,腐蚀


  breadwinners:挣钱养家的人(顶梁柱)


  be applicable to…:可用于…


  attach great importance to…:对…极为关注



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