雅思写作:警察携枪首段改写练习

发布时间:2017/09/25 作者:小歪

今天学为贵的雅思写作鱼儿老师给大家分享一个关于"警察是否应该携带枪支"的高分首段sample, 大家快来学习吧。

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题目:

Some believe policemen should be armed with guns in order to prevent street crimes. However, others think this measure would raise the level of social violence. What is your opinion?

首段改写Sample: 

It is not uncommon that police officers in many parts of the world would bear arms while on everyday duties. However,while some argue that this move may exacerbate(to make sth. worse) the violence on the street, I would argue that arming the police with weapons is a necessary evil for the sake of the social stability and civilians' security. 

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