雅思写作真经:关于老龄化

发布时间:2017/02/23 作者:小歪

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雅思写作:关于老龄化

In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?  (人口老龄化的影响)

首段

In more and more and developed countries we see the following trend: incomes rise, people get married later and have fewer kids. The result is that the demographics change and the population ages. While more older people sounds like a good thing (as they tend to be kind and warm-hearted) it can have a serious impact on economies and societies.

学习点:

income rises 收入增加  可以联想 = people’ greater career aspiration  学习知识一定要联想应用)

people get married later  大家也可以改写成 the tendency to delay marriage

have fewer kids = low birth rates/a preference for smaller families

demographics 人口统计/人口结构

age  这里是动词,表示“变老了“

have a serious impact on 有严重的影响

The result is that … 用于引出结果 

主体段第二段

Consider, also, that as more people reach their twilight years they will face increasing health problems and this puts huge pressure on health care and other social programs. In most countries government pays for at least some of the costs of health care, not to mention things like pensionsall of which means a big bill someone has to pay for. Simply put, the numbers do not add up.

学习点:

reach one’s twilight years 到了暮年  (联想  到了退休的年纪 reach retirement age 

face increasing health problems 面临日益增长的健康问题  原句也可以写成,there is an increase in chronic illnesses 慢性疾病越来越多

put huge pressure on  给某人带来压力 – place a heavy burden on

pension 养老金

…, all of which means (that) … 所有这些意味着……

pay a big bill for sb. 为某人付一大笔账

the numbers do not add up. 这个数字不能再加了。

(鱼儿老师整理,文章摘自《雅思写作真经总纲》P185

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